Monday, July 28, 2008

attn: Delhi High Court

your warmth against mine
moonstruck waves kiss our feet
unnatural acts?

4 Comments:

Blogger test said...

sad thing that romance becomes unnatural to the closed eyes of a few..

2:02 PM  
Blogger Vidya Jayaraman said...

A clever one, this
but second line does not pass
haiku lakshanas
:)

4:31 PM  
Blogger L. Ramakrishnan said...

it does if you pronounce 'our' the way it should be, with two syllables, instead of as 'are' :)

9:59 PM  
Blogger Quintessential Critic (Sudhir Narayana) said...

Hey new pic, new look! COOL. Whats up? Too busy to say hi?

TC

1:02 AM  

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